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-Kotoch is a undergorund place where orcs live.It's most disgusting place ever all smelly orcs runnin around trying to kill you and all.
+Kotoch is a underground place where orcs live. It's a most disgusting place, with smelly orcs running around trying to kill intruders.
-The stroy of Kotoch begins when the earth was forming first it was a dwarvish place with lot of rare stones,gems and nuggets but in the end everything just gone away.All dwarves left Kotoch in a serch for better place.And than some bright orc (they are very rare) came to idea that they can go in Kotoch and make a orchis city (Humans call this a place where you can't be more than one hour).
+The stroy of Kotoch begins when the earth was forming first it was a dwarvish place with lot of rare stones, gems and nuggets but in the end everything just went away. Records don't show why. All dwarves left Kotoch in search for a better place. And than some bright orc (they are very rare) came to the idea that they can go in Kotoch and make a orchis city (Humans call this a place where you can't be more than one hour).
-<nowiki> A pretty cool orc shaman lives there but nobody is sure if he is an orc since he is very smart and bright.</nowiki>
+A pretty cool Orc Saman lives there but nobody is sure if he is an orc since he is very smart and bright.
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